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JoeTurtle



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PostPosted: Tue Jul 29, 2008 12:50 pm   Post subject: Feedback Needed Reply with quote
I'm working on a song, its not 100% completed, but its fairly close. I wanted to see what other people think about it, to help improve it. It does need imporovement in many places, but I can't figure out how to fix them. (I'm still fairly new to MIDI and composing)

MIDI File
http://midishrine.com/midi/23865.mid
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PostPosted: Tue Jul 29, 2008 10:12 pm   Post subject: Reply with quote
It ain't too bad. But to me it sounds like a theme song for a kids show. That is just my opinion.
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Looking for someone to help me write lyrics for my songs. Anyone who is interested should PM me, or, send me a message to my myspace page...http://www.myspace.com/phrawlg
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JoeTurtle



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PostPosted: Sat May 16, 2009 4:34 pm   Post subject: Reply with quote
I've created another. I know the middle is still a bit shaky, but it is still decent. Please leave your opinion.

[urlhttp://www.wikiupload.com/download_page.php?id=114868[/url]
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